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Our silence lasts for miles,
tangled around my ankles and throat and
stretching down the highway to end at your
computer screen. I like the way it tastes,
like bitter chamomile and rust.

We crawl
from morning to dusk and drink too
much coffee and watch the Bruins pound
the Jets and forget that once upon a time,
we said we'd get married.
Sometimes our fingertips remember the tapping of keys
on late nights, our poetry and faith streaming between
our eyes in rivers of need, and we
cave inside. Just a little, though.

Mostly we sleep beneath the fluorescent lights
of God and sex and grocery shopping,
and we pretend we don't see
the misty-eyed couples
hanging around park benches.

We're good at surviving like this.
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:iconferoccello:
Awesome!!! I love this poem!!! Its subject brought me some beautiful verses of Juan Gelman from the backyard of my mind.
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:iconhowtosaveuhlife:
I really liked the first stanza!(: really pretty(:
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:iconkissthesunrise:
This is just awesome! :D I like this passage, I remember thinking something similar once.
and forget that once upon a time,
we said we'd get married.
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*Shairese May 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! (:
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:icontigermoth99:
Beautiful poetry with an arresting opening line. I love it.
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*Shairese May 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:icontigermoth99:
No worries

Have you thought about publishing it? It's an excellent piece :)
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*Shairese May 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Actually no, it's been a looong time since I've sent any thing in for publishing, I wouldn't even know where to send it to now. :p
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:icontigermoth99:
Have a look at Duotrope ([link])

It's an online directory of journals. I'd try places like Word Riot, Bolts of Silk, Up the Staircase etc
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